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Latest Flash Reviews
however it was too random. Also, it needs a preloader....try to find a storyline as well and not just some random animation. Work on the blood; it was kinda choppy. The voice is alright but "sausage" figures are only a few notches above stick animation which is basically not tolerated by some users here...all in all it was a nice animation...
Author's Response:
-Preloader: Check, I'll simply use the default NG Tank they'll provide for free in the future.
-Randomness: I figuired critically randomness could be pretty well-received here, but I understand how this could be TOO random.
-Blood choppiness: Yeah, you're right.
-Sausage figuires? I was kinda aiming for Mannequins, but yes, I agree how it could be just a few notches above sticks. Next time I'll do fully-rendered characters. Thank you for your input.
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but animation needs a lot of work...however, seeing that this is your first animation, I think you still can do better...I didn't quite enjoy the song as much as I think it was intended to and I think it would be better if you would provide translations in the animation itself...all in all a good job for a first flash...
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Not exactly fun or anything and the intro put me off so much...all in all not a bad sprite submission...
Author's Response:
Thanks, if I make any more I'm sure this has been invaluable for the future. Unfortunately I'm knee deep into MGS4 so I'm not sure when that future is...
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Latest Audio Reviews
You just used Mixcraft on this one...although I didn't enjoy your track layering and you didn't even adjusted the volume of the loops...
Author's Response:
Yup, not trying to hide it dude. I'm not especially proud of this one, but so many people seemed to like it so i just kept it on here. Meh. Sorry, you haven't cracked the Da Vinci code this time, but i'm sure your turn will come.
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I can't seem to enjoy this one..I'd say I did find myself in a trance for a while but other that I feel the main loop didn't come as ambient as it supposed to be...I dunno maybe its just me...I did like the pan pipe sound (probably a flute) from 2:00-2:33
Author's Response:
yea i feel ya... as i've said i've been at a total writers block and haven't been able to keep structure in my music.
thanks for your honest review
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it hurts my ears each time. But other than that, it's all right. I suggest you submit this in the video games section
Author's Response:
thanks for enjoying, yes the intro seems to be what pisses people off ^^
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