No. No way. This isn't real! I've completely forgot about this series until now, and cheesus crust all meaty, this shit is still good.
No. No way. This isn't real! I've completely forgot about this series until now, and cheesus crust all meaty, this shit is still good.
I always adore stories that can be told without dialogue. Actions transcend language barriers, and this one executes this quite well.
Three Times
I watched this three times in a row. My ears are bleeding, my eyes are red...I feel like killing something right now.
Good Job...
But honestly, in the 16 months of being away, you could have done a lot more and you know it. I enjoyed everything but I see no improvement at all. It's not bad but it did not get any better...
Good animation...
however it was too random. Also, it needs a preloader....try to find a storyline as well and not just some random animation. Work on the blood; it was kinda choppy. The voice is alright but "sausage" figures are only a few notches above stick animation which is basically not tolerated by some users here...all in all it was a nice animation...
-Preloader: Check, I'll simply use the default NG Tank they'll provide for free in the future.
-Randomness: I figuired critically randomness could be pretty well-received here, but I understand how this could be TOO random.
-Blood choppiness: Yeah, you're right.
-Sausage figuires? I was kinda aiming for Mannequins, but yes, I agree how it could be just a few notches above sticks. Next time I'll do fully-rendered characters. Thank you for your input.
Nice Drawings...
but animation needs a lot of work...however, seeing that this is your first animation, I think you still can do better...I didn't quite enjoy the song as much as I think it was intended to and I think it would be better if you would provide translations in the animation itself...all in all a good job for a first flash...
Well Done!
I didn't have the time nor the opportunity to review this properly when it was first shown in the site. It was sort of a misnomer seeing that you used a PW picture as your icon but then we see that most of the time...anyway you did an awesome job on this and I'm wishing that the next LL day is as awesome as this.
I was hoping to attract more fanfags with the finger :]
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